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PostSubject: Berrys BOS(done)   Berrys BOS(done) I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 14, 2013 9:38 am

Name: Blood Needles
Description: Her blood covers her body and needles shot out around her. It's like a shield. Once the needles hit a target then stop and stay until she believes she is out of danger.
Level: Beginner
Posts to get Basic: 100
Name(Basic): Blood Arrows
Description(Basic): Berry gains more control of the needles. She can brake off the needles and shot them off at her enemies.
Posts to get Advanced: 500
Name(Advanced): Blood Shower
Description(Advanced): She can control the needles without being in danger. She can shot the arrows freely and controls the needles and where they go.
Posts to get Master: 1000
Name(Master): Blood Shower
Description(Master): Berry has full control over her powers. This is the same power just with more strength.

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PostSubject: Re: Berrys BOS(done)   Berrys BOS(done) I_icon_minitimeFri Nov 15, 2013 12:00 am

I like the idea of your BoS, but I think it needs a little more revising. It seems a bit OP.

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What do you think I should do to make it better?

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PostSubject: Re: Berrys BOS(done)   Berrys BOS(done) I_icon_minitimeFri Nov 15, 2013 12:04 am

Make it a bit more basic, look over your BoS then see what you think needs fixing.

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PostSubject: Re: Berrys BOS(done)   Berrys BOS(done) I_icon_minitimeFri Nov 15, 2013 12:15 am

Well I looked it over and took out something that I thought made it wordy but I'm not sure how to make it more basic..

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PostSubject: Re: Berrys BOS(done)   Berrys BOS(done) I_icon_minitimeFri Nov 15, 2013 12:18 am

Well, for now, hold off on your BoS. The previous owners made it a bit complicated so I have to revise the whole template, alright?

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Ok..

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